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Kevin. · Geplaatst: Di Dec 11, 2007 21:02

Hippogriefje
The Love Battle

Yay, I really like your story xD Cho is very IC in this story and it's so her to try and blackmail Harry into finding another girlfriend. And I think it's so cute that Harry admitted his feelings for Hannah. I really think that this is a very interesting story and I would love to read the next chapters ^^

xMartine. · Geplaatst: Wo Dec 12, 2007 17:34

The Love Battle
Hippogriefje

It's a kind of fanfiction I've never read before, but I like it very much! It's so sweet, how you describe the feelings that Harry get for Hannah. And now is Ernie hurting Harry, nice. Razz

I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
xx Martine

Rayatje · Volleerd Tovenaar Verdiend: 0 Sikkels

The Love Battle

I like it! Very Happy

It's a very original fanfiction, I would have never could think of such an original subject. I don't think Cho is like that in the books, but reading another view on Cho is intresting. Cho is a real *beep* xD I love how you put down the enmity between Cho and Harry. I also think it's sweet how Harry falls in love with Hannah and how Ernie is trying to procect Hannah. Aww, poor Harry. *kicks Ernie* Your way of describing Harry's feelings is good. Keep on writing. : DD

Sweet Hermione · Geplaatst: Wo Feb 06, 2008 22:12

Author: Elisabeth.
Title: My life so far

1. Your nickname is my second name. That's nice. ^^
2. Hm... About your story. I'm not really impressed. The subject isn't that original... but of course, I don't know what your plans are for the story.
And I don't like Ginny, but that's not your fault, of course.
You're allright with English, though. ( = So... Well that was my opinion.

doke · Geplaatst: Do Feb 07, 2008 20:16

The son of Dumbeldore
Genner

The story is AMAZING!
I really love it!
I hope you really, really, post fast. because I can heardly wait!

doke

Elisabeth. · 1e jaars Verdiend: 271 Sikkels

Son of Dumbledore - Genner

Liky liky! I like this story, so keep on writing.

jilly-ann · Geplaatst: Vr Feb 22, 2008 9:55

author story: Pottergirl
title of story: Big Potter
your opinion + arguments: I think your FF is briliant. I really do. With Voldemort and all the other caracters who susposed to be dead. And Umbridge how's good know, yeah right. I don't buy it. I like Sirius <3. Er.. well let me think... what can I say more. Oh, I know! I hope there's coming more.

Sweet Hermione · Geplaatst: Wo Feb 27, 2008 17:32

Author: Pottergirl
Title: Big Potter

I think you didn't knew this, but I have been a fan from the start! I read ''Big Potter'' when it was a Dutch fanfic. It was a while ago, but I never forgot about it. I am SO relieved you started this fanfic again! I hope you will write lots and lots and lots of this fanfic, 'cause I'm fond with your idea.

SPOILERS!

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I remember Voldemort with his Harry voodoo, which I think is the most funny and brilliant part ever xD You're going to do that again? xD
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But well, uh, what to say? I love it already!
Especially Snape's part. But well, I love Snape.
*points at own fanfic... yes peepz, I will finish it some day. xD*

Well.. go on! Write more! =D

Loes · Geplaatst: Vr Jul 11, 2008 20:49

Autor; Elisabeth.
Title; My life so far, ginny weasleys story
Opinion;
I think it was a good start. You explained everthing very well:)
It reads very easy . And i'm sorry for my bad english.
I'm looking forward to your new chapter.
bye x

Patricia

Author: MJB
Title: Halloween

I couldn't stop reading the first part. I really like the subject, and where it is heading. I'm allready feeling sorry for Sirius and Remus. James and Lily are very cute toghether, and I think you did a really interesting thing with Peter. It is really nice to know what happend to him in the year before.
It could really be canon and I can't wait till you post the next part.

Lix · 7e jaars Verdiend: 1 Sikkels

The Diary
by Genner

Though you've only posted the prologue so far, I really like your writing style. I've always been one for long intro descriptions to set the mood anyway and I love it when writers have a nice big vocabulary. On top of that, I'm just curious on how everything after this chapter's going to be written. Are we f.e. going to read his actual diary or is it mixed with a restricted narrator? So, I'll be checking that topic regularly.

Nevodeon · Geplaatst: Vr Nov 07, 2008 17:03

1. author story: Mrs. Jessica Black
2. title of story: Halloween
3. your opinion + arguments: I absolutely, no doubt, seriously, completely, totally loved the story. Srsly, you could write the next Potter books. Your writing style is so damn brilliant and very realistic. It pulls you right into the story, just like JKR's style, which is ofcourse a huge compliment Wink

The story gives a good view on the murder and everything around it. Very realistic and a super written story. I love you and your story.

Dan

Lix · 7e jaars Verdiend: 1 Sikkels

The Diary
by Genner

I almost begin to feel sorry for the spoiled brat. Nice parallel of the lives of Draco and Harry. Up until now it's not really the story that draws me, though it does create some suspense on my part, but mainly your writing style. Except for a few minor grammar mistakes, it's written in such a pleasant way. Well, I've already gone into that, but I just wanted to underline it..
Also, I know it's very difficult to write a H/D story. You have to present them at least a little IC, but the fact that they fall for each other /seems/ really unlikely. So you have to change some little things in their personalities as the story evolves. I think you're doing OK on that so far, as long as you don't rush things.
And personally I think the diary is a great way of showing that change in personality.

Lix · 7e jaars Verdiend: 1 Sikkels

Supernova
by Mrs Jessica Black

This just brought tears to my eyes. It reminded my of Sirius' death and it's just such beautiful one-shot. Thank you for writing this. Though I can't stop wondering, who's there waiting for him? It might be obvious.. Still, I love open endings, leaving a lot to imagination..

Lix · 7e jaars Verdiend: 1 Sikkels

The Diary
by Genner

And now I'm really intrigued by the story. I had to check on my breathing in that last part, as I was really taken by the tension between Harry and Draco. I want more! I want more!