The Changed Destiny FINISHED

Hippogriefje

Hi everybody! ^^
My next story is about Remus <3.
I know it's a short story, but it was a charge for my English class(to write a fantasy-story).
And I thought it was pretty good (as I say myself) and I would like to share it with you. I hope I'll get some reactions, it would help me so much!

Kirsten
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The Changed Destiny

A ten year old boy, who was named Remus lived near a forest with his parents. One day, he was bored, so he decided to play outside. He ran to the forest to play at a little lake with his little plastic boat.
’’Be carefull!’’ his mother yelled behind him. Remus raised his hand, as sign that he heard her. Humming he walked to the lake. He placed the boat carefully on the water and looked how it slowly slided to the middle of the lake. Suddenly, he felt a warm breeze of air in his neck. Remus slowly stood up, and walked to his boat. But when he picked it up, a big wolf jumps into the lake! Remus falled down, all wet and screaming. He dropped his boat. Than he heard a low and growling voice:
’’I hope you will have some painfull nights...’’
Remus screamed:
’’I don’t want to die!! Wait...a talking wolf?’’
’’I’m a werewolf you idiot!’’
‘’You’re not going to kill me?’’
The werewolf smiled coldly.
Remus suddenly jumped back to his feet and ran as fast as he could. The werewolf followed him and grabbed Remus’ leg.
Remus falled down, crying.
’’I don’t want-‘’
He felt a great pain in his neck. After 3 or 4 seconds the pain stopped. Remus looked around. The werewolf was gone. He rubbed his neck and felt 2 little pits. He shrug his shoulders and walked home. That night, he suddenly woke up.
’’My boat!’’ Remus thought, and he putted on his clothes to go outside. He went to the lake. When he saw his boat and wanted to pick it up, he saw something white in the water. It was the reflection of the full moon. He looked up to the moon and at once, he felt pain all over his body.
’’Painfull, isn’t it?’’
Remus looked behind him.
’’You again!’’
Remus was shocked. He had a low, growling voice! He looked down at the ground and saw hairy feet with claws.
’’No! You made me a werewolf too!’’
’’Yes’’, said the other werewolf, ‘’it’s your changed destiny.’’
And he disapeared in the dark night.

The end

(Yes I know it's short)

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