Rhona




oke my enlish s*cks, but I'm going to try and vote :D

my first vote goes to poem number 5:
It gives a really depresed look at the life of a spider. I hate spiders, but really if you read this poem, your heart is gonna break. The writer has put the story of the spiders on paper. 

my second vote goes to poem number 4:
it's quet catchy. The rhyme is good en it reads like a book. The poem is going like a train. You don't realise that you're reading a poem. Well done. 

My third vote goes to poem number 1: 
If you read the poem, without the words "spider" and "spiderweb"you'll stil got the idea that the theme is spiders. And that is is good job.


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