Ailey




Loes: About Death Rattle: Very beautiful, love it!
Plot: About your desire poem: perfect, it's amazing, really, very deep and it's just very beautiful, i can't express in words what i feel but i really love it.
Loes: No title ones: I really love them, they are amazing, what inspires you to write these poems? Because it looks to me like there are a lot of 'hidden feelings' in there? (if you understand what i mean with that? ^^")

I wrote this poem in a couple of days, mostly very very late in the evening. It's mainly about friends i've lost. I hope you like it. It's not having a real title yet, but here i did use a title, but i'm not sure if this is going to be the real title.

Still I feel regret

We promised to be
friends we would stay
we were childs, but
still I feel regret

You’re decisions were too loud to
make sound for me
it’s rush now, but
your speed slowed for me

I’ve made my mistakes but
your thoughts were too outspoken 
to be said in public
we were like adrenalin, too fast
for our fragile floor

All I could see, us being darkblue
under water, bruised
your little whispers looking through
my lonely heart, damaging 

Voices turn the curtains down
separation broke us, you struggled
closer to her, but
still I feel regret.


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