Sweet Hermione




@ Marlie: ''Clarity'' - like ''clear visions''. And thanks for your comment, dear. I miss you - come back to me! You go on too many vacations! ^^
1. Hm.. not totally satisfied with this poem.. it's not as mysterious as you are, most of the time. But I have to say it's like the first time I understand about all the words. xD But... I'm extremely happy with your ''There will always be someone better / To talk to, when the weather / Cries grains into the sand.'' That's not only wise, it's also true.
2. Not sure what to think about it... I don't get the ending, sorry. I think I like your title, though. 
Hm.. oh sorry I'm not as enthou as usual this time, they''re all just a bit anders.
@ Loes: I like it. I adore the title, I like the ending. Good words and... a kinda complicated and simple in one.


We need new poems! We really do! ^^
So I found an old poem. It's written about four months ago.
It's about desire. I have no idea why I didn't make the last line rhyme, but I refuse to change anything because I made it such a long time ago. It was written very fast and I think I didn't changed anything in the first place as well. So... special. I hope you like it. I think I kind of do.


Big, hungry eyes
(but not as much as I)
can be overwhelming you

It’s almost as funny
as the hidden clue
this guy wasn’t moving
through

Their hands were dry
as they surround you
on love, in sadness

like I do

A day like this was not as much
as despair running through my tights
The lights went out and I will overcome
the dreams in fever that I watch

I’m giving some, and more, something
keeps me heartbound like stone
My throne was still so bright but you
stopped feeding me for being out of sight

My whole world stopped but there I spin
no bottles but a galaxy chase
I have no words here left within
I’m terrified to love you


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