Sweet Hermione




  @ Marlie: I love both poems. You're so... so... good. xD
1. Broken dreams and teddy bears / Giving comfort in the night / Our elders forsake their duties / To spend some time in fight Ouch, that's heavy. 2. This one is too complicated for me, I don't really understand it...
@ nirphania (wb!): he’ll take the high road / I’ll take the low road  I like that. Though I still have the feeling that the poem isn't done yet... strange.
@ Loesje: Oh yès, I like this! It's so difficult to make a song and you did it! =D I like it. Sorry, no details, I just like it.

This poem is about being in control and again - love. 
It's a though situation I describe - she's in control, she holds the key. But what should she do?


Clarity

I wished to see you handpalms
sweaty, though I know they won’t
be 

You keep your eyes clean in
the skineffects of
irony

The slowdown was a pride
you made, it’s everything I
see

You give me space, so please send
some molecules to keep me
busy 

(You built a river, without a clue
I’ll stream and seek for
you)

Don’t bother me with myths of
months, you reservated love for
me 

It’s killing time in destiny
I’m curling while you stroke my
knee

The silent struggle 
makes you fitt

She holds the key


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