Loesewies Boterslag




@ Sweet Hermione: The last stanza especially is really good. Also, I like the line you started with. It's really simple, but quite strong. Kudos!!!

New poem.. Well, it's not really new, I wrote it a long time ago, after seeing The Beach for the first time. It inspired me to make this poem:

Losing my religion

Oh, how I long for the Beach, and her
paradise ideals. Her perfect perfection,
her heaven-like beauty. Oh, how I long,
how I crave...

Oh, thank the Lord, for I have made
it to the Beach, and her pearl-colored
way of life. From now on, mere happiness
and laughter shall cross my white-sanded
path.

Until it starts to rain...



Love, Loesje.


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