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Charlotte::
Ow it's a while you gave that reaction but you asked me about the last two stanzas of a poem. And yes indeed, I think you first have to face your fears or your past eo be able to accept your own mistakes. Without accepting your mistakes you can't grow further in your life because you'll always be stuck on that part. But that's my own thought. And also the second question is a yes, I am having quite a hard time, but I'll try to see the best side of it.

CoToS::
Ah thanks for the compliment and now a reaction on your poems ^^ 1. whoah! I really like it, it has a rhyme in it hasn't it? You choosed your words wisely and even if you have to read it two times it is great! I really love it ^.^ 2. I am not quite sure, it doesn't really appeals me and I don't really like it. It has something strange over it what I don't enjoy. Sorry.

And of course I have some poems for all of you. Also my poem for the EPC of April, the poem that became 3th ^^ I would love some reactions on that one.

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Years passed since the first time
The first time in the passage
I could scream till my lungs failed
I could cry till my tears dried up

The one moment of truth
The one moment of betrayal
The steps were easily made
And the scars will never fade

Lies and broken smiles
It looked so easy at the beginning
But then again
Mistakes are so easily made

Walking in the dark
Searching for the light
Knowing that going back
Is the easy step

I tell you I learned from my mistakes
Knowing that I will still be lying
And give you the broken smile
Just to calm you

Will I ever learn
To accept my mistakes?
Will ever learn
To live without the broken smiles?


My poem for the EPC of April. It tells about me and how I changed/progressed in the last four years. Untill now the most difficult years of my life. The passage in the first stanza is redirecting to my biggest mistake untill now, for some known and other unknown. It ends with how I think at this moment about the past four years.

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Memories and Friendship

The memories
The memories of laughter
Friendship 

Memories
Are bounded
By people
Who care about them

Memories
Not to be forgotten
In this friendship
In this rhythm 

Together
We have the world
Together
We care
About those memories


Whoah, this is a happy one ^^ At least, that's the meaning of it XD It's not one of my best poems, but it has something that I enjoy.

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Inside of me
Tears are flowing down
Like a storm that’s raging
Will it ever end?

But that’s just the outside

Ripped apart
Shattered in every way
A broken soul

Will I ever learn to live?
Will I ever smile again?
It seems impossible

My thoughts are dark
My scars are open
And my wounds aren’t healing

I feel like dying
Slow and painful
I am dying inside


This one isn't a happy one. I wrote this at a moment that I could cry till I died. I was at my point of letting everything out and this poem came out of it. It's quite depressing, but at least it helps me to write my feelings down.


Comments, tips are really loved! ^^



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