Pottergirl




This ain't gonna work if nobody's votin'! Come on people, vooooooting time!
I had a hard time voting, because the poems are so personal, it's really hard to criticize them (in both the good and the bad way).
I also noticed there were soooo much depressing poems, a lot of people seem to have had some really hard times in their life, or have a sort of pessimistic view on life! That really struck me.


First vote: 1st Poem
Why: I like the idea behind it. I like that you didn't rhyme because you thought rhyming makes a poem 'right', while the subject of your poem wasn't.
I do have to admit I thought it was a poem that made me feel utterly hopeless. 

Second vote: 7th Poem
Why: First of all, I adore the title. I really do xD Especially because the title's almost longer than the whole poem :')
I just struggle a little with the 'Roos'-thing, just like Josse said. You could've changed it to 'Rose', because it fits better. But anyway, I really like the shortness and the simplicity of the poem. 

Third vote: 6th Poem
Why: The whole concept behind this poem is the thing I like about it. The whole 'I am me'-thing. The poem sounds really self-conscious, which is a good thing (in my opinion). Chapeau (:


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