Loesewies Boterslag




My first vote goes to the 7th poem: Beautiful words, honestly. The way you use words is quite extraordinary! "a million words to tell you in a thousand ways", a beautiful sentence. I also like that you twisted that sentence in the last stanza. Chapeau!

My second vote goes to the 3rd poem: I like the structure in this poem: a long sentence, short, short, long sentence. You describes the sadness very well. I also like that the open ending, that makes it seem like you're to emotional to continue or something..(or is that just me..xD)

And my last vote goes to the 6th poem: I like the symbolism and metaphors in this poem. It's so full of emotion and life.. it's great.

Really hard choice, this month!
Love, Loesje.


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