FelixdeFeniks




I'm just in time to vote!^^ It was hárd to choose this time; they were all so good! Ö

My first vote goes to: nr. 3!
I think it's really really really pretty. I like the rhyme and the repetition ("Silent ways, silent winds, silent whispers", "acid rays, acid rain, acid rivers"). The ending is really powerful and a bit...experimental xD ...but I love it! I think may recognise the writing style, but I'm really not sure. Good job!

My second vote goes to: nr. 5!
Because I like all the metaphors/similes and the fact that it rhymes. The rhythm is good as well, and the last stanza is kind of unexpectedly funny xD Very beautiful and cleverly written!

My third vote goes to: nr. 6!
Because I love the title xD Nah, kidding, I love the poem in general. It's very narrative and different from the other poems. I really like the fire-metaphorthingy and the last sentence is really pretty. And again, the rhyme is really good. Nice nice nice beautiful!


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