Smoky




Right, I'm making up for not voting last contest, by being the first one to vote now :')


My first vote goes to poem number:
7

Because:
The title isn't super appealing, but you're poem is pretty impressive! I especially like the second stanza. ''A single hand to kill the sun'' Wow 0.o that's good.  It's really deep and obvious at the same time, which makes it nice to read.


My second vote goes to poem number:
6

Because: 
The title fits the lyrics perfectly. I love your vocabulary and I like the rhyme. You play with the words which is nice to read. For instance: ''Passionately, heatedly, without rationality'' That's so good!
The ending is sad, but sweet. 


My third vote goes to poem number:
2

Because:
The phrase ''This is the fear'' is good, strong. It's the base for a good poem. I like that that phrase comes back over and over again. It's cool that you've described you're own feelings. Like the rythm and your voc is good.


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