Sweet Hermione




Argh, this was hard to do. There were al lot of good poems.

First vote: Child Of The Other Side
Because: Sorry Marlie, you're my favorite again. ^^ It's a bloody good poem. Your subject is original and deep. Your vocabulary and creativity is amazing. And I like the line ''Can you hear me coming tonight''. So, my first vote for you.

Second vote: Kelly Griffel
Because: This poem attracted my attention directly. You haven't used complicated words or rhyme schemes. It's the simplicity that works. I really like your ''Ghost Town'' idea. I love the last two lines.

Third vote: Smoky
Because: You get my last vote -  I had to chose between  you and Tarantallegra. But it's hard to explain why I like your poem so much. The last four lines really work for me, I guess. They sound strong, partly because of the rhyme.


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