FelixdeFeniks




Why is it that I cannot write proper poems for this contest?^^" I'll try again next month, here are my votes...

My first vote goes to: Tarantallegra. 
This poem really fits my interpretation of the photo. The rhyme and rhythm are brilliant and you've even managed to find a word that rhyms to "world"! (I've been looking for that for ages!^^) I also really love the last sentence.

My second vote goes to: Smoky. 
I agree that it's very different from what you usually write, but I love it! I like the fact that the phrase "by the old oak trees" returns at the end of the poem, and I can really picture the whole story. Love it!

My third vote goes to: Lavender Brown. 
It is a beautiful poem. The boy being a sort of king on his throne is well thought up, and I like the -unexpected- rhyme at the end. I like the words you use, especially in the first stanza.


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