Sofie




Okay, I'm fuggin intimidated by you guys's vocabulary >.< All your poems make mine look like written by a ten year old, and so simple; gawd. Anywayz, well, before I read yours, I was satisfied with mine so I might as well post it to participate too.
My vision of the poem is a boy who has his own special place where he's overwhelmed by happiness and power. He feels awesome there, he's on top of the world and he wants to embrace his life. It's not the deepest poem around (well, mine will never be), but it's joyful :) The title, 'This day is yours', I have chosen because nothing could take the feeling away from him. Maybe he'll never be this happy anymore in his all life, but this day will always stay his.
And I know I'm not supposed to comment to other people's poems, but @ T O N K S: your interpretation of the picture is stunning, srsly (: Congrats.

This day is yours

Have you ever felt like 
you were on top of the world,
and you wanted to embrace it
with wide-open arms?

Have you ever felt like
nothing could bring you down,
and you wanted to kiss all people
two times on each cheek?

Have you ever felt like
nothing could break your day,
and you had woken up on a bed
of four-leaved clovers?

Well, I have.
It’s the best thing that has ever happened to me.


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